Tuesday, May 27, 2014

Shocking Sunday


Most of family in this world ever had family conflict. It can be between father and mother, parents and children, or among the children. This case happened in my family last year. Both of my older brothers have family conflict. It is because of my second brother’s careless. It was a shocking Sunday morning when my oldest brother threatened to leave home because of his conflict with my second brother.

It was Sunday morning, both of my brothers didn't go to work, so do I. so all of my family members was at home at that time. My father has some cows which its corral was near the chicken coop which consist of 1000 of hens on it. At that time my second brother wanted to help my father to move his cow corral into another place. Unfortunately, the calf was deliberated and run into under the chicken coop. it made all of the hens in the coop was very shocked. It made very loud noise and some of the hens on the coop suddenly died.

Heard the loudly noise from his chicken coop, my oldest brother looked into the coop. he was very shocked when he saw all of the hens on the coop was deliberated, moreover some of them was died. When he knew the root of the problem came from the calf which was moved by my second brother, he was very angry. He called his younger brother and scolded him. My second brother is a stubborn person, he didn't keep silent when my oldest brother scolded him. He thought that was not his fault. Then, they were quarreling. When my father came and asked to stop quarreling, my oldest brother thought that my father took on my second brother side. The dispute was not stopped. My oldest brother threatened to leave home. He put his clothes into his beg while he was crying.

My father saw my oldest brother put his clothes into his beg. He came and spoke wisely. He told to both of brothers that every problem has its own solution. My father talked a lot with them. Finally, the situation became calm. After that, my father caught the hens which was deliberated and put it into the coop one by one. But in the other side both of my brothers didn't speak each other for two days later they were reunite again.

So, from this shocking situation I learn many things. We don’t need to solve the problem by using commotion and violence. And also I get an experience that every single problem has its own solution.

2 comments:

  1. hai ari :)
    i think your paragraph is already good, but you should pay more attention for the mechanic such as capital letter in the second paragraph. In the third paragraph, in the sentence "He put his clothes into his beg while he was crying.", i think the "beg" should be "bag".
    overall i love your writing ari, good job :)

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  2. hi Arik
    wow! story of a family conflict
    your writing is good, i just to put my comments on your mechanic; capitalize. and your diction. keep writing!

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