Do you have a best friend? Do you
often spare you time with him or her? Well, have a best friend is a wonderful
thing. We can spend our time together or just share a lot of things that we
have or we feel. We can share our feeling when we are happy, sad, mad,
disappointed, and so on. So, having a best friend is important for me. Now, I
will tell you little bit story about my best friend, her appearance, and also
her good personality.
My best friend’s name is Made Pande
Candra Sapitri. I call her yellow, because she really likes yellow. Most of her
things are yellow. Candra is 19 years old. She was born in Tabanan, 18 August
1994. She comes from Selemadeg, it is one of districts in Tabanan Regency. She
is one of English education students, and also she is my classmate. In
singaraja she lives at Kakaktua Street number 7A.
Candra
is a good looking girl. She is not too tall but she is look cute. She has an
oval face, black and narrow eyes. She is wearing glasses too. She also has thin eyebrows. Her skin is not
too pale, it is same with most of Balinese people. Her long and black hair
makes her look as the true Balinese girl.
My
best friend has good personality. She is a polite girl. She always respects
each other and also cares with all of her friends. She always helps her friends
when they need help. Candra also is a smart girl. She is an active student in
the classroom, she always states her opinion in front of the class and also she
always thinks before she speaks or acts.
Well,
candra is my best friend. We often spare time together and share our feeling
each other. I am happy having a best friend like her. She is beautiful girl who
always care with the other and always thinks first before she does something. She
is a perfect friend to complete my life.
omg
ReplyDeletereally?
your writing is good, Ari. but maybe it is just too short. you may put more details and explanation for every paragraph your wrote.
bdw, your friend's name is the same with me :D lol
your story and your writing is good arik,
ReplyDeletebut I suggest you to change the sentence 'She is wearing glasses too' become 'She always wears glasses too' because the sentence 'She is wearing' I think it means that Candra use glasses just when you wrote this story.
but overall I like your writing arik.. good job :)