What do you feel if you stay far
away from someone you love? Sure, you will miss him or her so much. I have some
people which I love so much in my life. They are my parents, my brothers, my
sister in law, my twin nephews, and also my boy friend. Well, I will tell you little
bit about my boy friend and also why I miss him so much.
My boy friend’s name is I Kadek
Wirawan. I call him Wi Dek. He is a boy who was born four years before me. He
is a Balinese person comes from a small village which same with my mother
village before she married with my father. So, I know him because he is my
grandparent’s neighbor.
My boy friend has good appearance.
He has an oval face. He also has black and straight hair, black eyes and thick
eyebrows. His skin is not too pale and too dark. I think it is same with mine.
He doesn’t have beard and moustache. He is not too tall but he is taller than
me. For me, he is good looking enough.
In my opinion, he is a hard worker
young boy. When he was in Bali, he worked at Bali Hyatt Hotel in Sanur. In the
evening after working in the hotel he is a carver. But now he is not in Bali
again. He works in one of cruise line company “Carnival Cruise Line” which is
sailing in United State of American Ocean. He has been there for six months. We
just communicate by Skype, facebook, twitter and also he calls me by phone. But
I still miss him, because we have never met for six months. It is quite hard
for us, but we still survive.
In short, stay far away from someone
we love will make us always miss him or her. Although it is not an easy thing
for me, I can survive if I believe I can do it. So, for the people who are in
Long Distance relationship, we should keep our heart carefully, be faithful,
and believe everything will be okay. It will make us be patient waiting for him
or her.
Arik, you're so lucky having a boyfriend like Kadek Wirawan. From your writing, i can see that you really admire him. Your writing is good and i love the way you describe your boyfriend. However, you need to pay attention for the grammar. Actually, you write "boy friend" in your story in which it should be "boyfriend". There is no space between boy and friend. Overall your writing is so interesting and i really love it :)
ReplyDeletethank you ita for your comment.
Deletei am so sorry for replaying it so late.
thank you for visiting my blog.
I like your story arik..
ReplyDeleteyour writing is good also but I find in the sentence 'He is a Balinese person comes from a small village which same with my mother village before she married with my father.' , I think it would be better if the words' my mother village' change or add 's' become 'my mother's village.'
overall, I like your story arik :)
good job !
thank you for your comment gita. :)
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