Free hugs is a real life story of a man
who offer hugs to strangers in public places. He invited everyone that he met
for a free hugs campaign. The man’s name is Juan Mann it showed in the last of
his video. He is a tall man and also thin. He has long hair and beard too. He
was also wearing glasses. At the first he was wearing red coat, blue T-shirt
and brown trousers. And next day he changed his clothes. He was wearing a
T-shirt, a tie and brown trousers. He brought a sign reads “free Hugs” to reach
the attention of the people on the street. First, he walked around on the
street with the sign that he brought. But no one respect heeds his invitation,
instead the people keep walking and some of them laughed at him. Then, the
turning point caused the free hugs to begin to happen, when the old women
respect with him and she gave him big hug. The women made point of view of the
other people changed. Then, the people
followed the act of the old women to give him a huge hug. After that, some of
them hug each other in that place. Juan Mann motives eventually gave way to a
gradual increase of people willing to be hugged, with other people male and
female. At the first, when the police saw these activities they banned it. They
tried to stop the campaign. Because of that, the man and the people made the
other way to get their target. Mann and his companions used a petition to
attempt to convince authorities that his campaign should be allowed to
continue. After that, they didn’t just give a hug, but also signatures. That
was really unbelievable, His petition reached 10,000 signatures. He submitted
it and was allowed to continue giving free hugs. Finally, they did the same thing,
they hug each other invariably the police also did it. So, after watching this
video, in short we need to respect each other. The hugs are mean to be an act of kindness - selfless which is performed just to make others feel
better. Even we have many differences but we are the same, we have and we need
love. We need to share our love and our happiness to the other people.
perfectly I really interesting with your writing. but I must correct your post. I look at the second sentences. you tell "He invite everyone that he met for a free hugs campaign." I think that is wrong on grammar. in my opinion you must write like this " He invited everyone that he met for a free hugs campaign. "
ReplyDeleteand one more. i think you must change your font. because your font make me difficult to understand between "H" and "N'
thank you ary.... good luck :D
thank you for your comment Maysa :)
ReplyDeleteGood writing Arik,,,,
ReplyDeletei think you need to revise your sentence
And next day he was changed his clothes.
it will be good in grammatical if you omit the word "was" of the sentence....
nice to visit your blog :)
thank you ita..
ReplyDeleteI'll do it.:)